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- Goooooood morning, New York! And what a morning it is, this 9th of June! It's such a lovely day and if we are to believe our network's favorite weatherman—yes, we are talking about you, Johnny—it'll only get better. He predicted a nice, warm 80.6 degrees for us, and I must say I'm ready to get my summer on, Troy. What about you?
- Oh, definitely, Shirley. A bit early to speak of a real summer, but New York sure is feeling it!
- And how couldn't they, Troy? The sun being out is a sign for better days to come for many. After the... events of the past few days, it certainly is a welcome sight.
- Right you are, Shirley. I hope you ladies out there aren't wearing your dresses too tightly, because—
- Troy ! (laughs)
- Well, Shirley, I'm just saying that if the GenderBender is out there today, they might end up being too big and bulky to fit in that tiny dress! (laughs)
- What a preposterous nickname, don't you think? Surely they could've come up with a better alternative, such—

Ok. That's enough of that. Dalton swiped left and exchanged YouTube for Twitter. Fox News would never become any more than what it already was, would it? Trashy news with trashy newsflashes. Take that "GenderBender" for example. If it had been a mutant, now that Dalton could've believed. But a maniac with a ray gun? Really? C'mon. You had to remain a bit believable. The public loved the story, though. The internet had already developed a ton of memes about the subject, and more and more "victims" cried for attention on social media. Dalton was one of the skeptics. Sure, he was curious, but that didn't stop him from using his brain. Mutation was evolution. Ray guns were just science-fiction. There's no such thing as the boogieman and there's no such thing as the GenderBender.


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Re: The Fairer Sexle Mer 23 Déc 2015, 09:21
Oh god. What was happening to me ? For once, my skin color wasn't the problem. But those tiny little hills down there, that was a problem. Was it a new ability ? Or just a weird trick someone played on me ? I was just walking and I saw a weird guy, a flash and ... that. I did'nt know what to do, I was just .. shocked, disturbed, and really, really stressed. So stressed that I turned purple. Good. Now I was a girl with purple skin in dude clothes that are too big for her. Great. I had to hide .. hide and find a bra. Definitely.

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Oh god. What was happening to me ? For once, my skin color was'nt the problem. But thoses tiny little hills down there, that was a problem. Was it a new ability ? Or just a weird trick someone played on me ? I was just walking and i saw a weird guy, a flash and ... that. I did'nt know what to do, i was just .. shocked, disturbed, and really, really stressed. So stressed that I turned purple. Good. Now I was a girl in dude's clothings too big for her with purple skin. Great. I had to hide .. hide and find a bra. Definitively.


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Re: The Fairer Sexle Mer 23 Déc 2015, 14:06
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Professor Sip:
Ps : Ca a l'air beaucoup mais c'est juste parce que je parle beaucoup XD I PROMISE.

Je sais pas encore ce qui marche pour toi niveau corrections, ni comment t'écris d'habitude, donc les premiers posts RP vont surtout être pour apprendre à connaître ton style d'écriture etc. :D N'hésite pas à me dire si j'fais trop de corrections ou si tu veux arrêter pour x temps et tout et tout. J'ai l'habitude de faire des RP avec des corrections (pour mon français) et y a des moments où ça enlève un peu le plaisir de répondre, donc vraiment n'hésite pas si ça devient le cas pour toi \o/

Et si t'as besoin de plus d'infos/explication/mais pourquoi O_O/cookies, fais-moi signe aussi.

was'nt / did'nt = wasn't + didn't → tu vas voir, la moitié du temps, l'anglais n'est pas logique /sort L'apostrophe va à la place du "o" de not
thoses tiny little hills = those (pas en pluriel)
i = I → toujours en majuscule en anglais, même au milieu de la phrase
dude's clothings = ou bien dude clothing (c'est déjà en pluriel) ou bien dude clothes → pas besoin de l'apostrophe ici, parce que c'est pas les vêtements d'un certain dude, mais un substantif composé de deux autres substantifs (hahaha, on voit que j'étudie la grammaire en anglais et pas en français parce que j'ai aucune idée comment dire en français /meurt). Perso je préfère la deuxième variante, parce que tu parles de ce que Simon porte, du coup tu sais ce que c'est. Clothing c'est plus formel et moins spécifique. Ça peut être n'importe quoi.
too big for her = vu que tu écris à la première personne, ça devrait être "too big for me", nan ? A moins que tu voulais dire "Now I was a girl with purple skin in dude clothes that are too big for her". Là tu parles des vêtements qui sont trop grands pour Simon étant fille, pas pour Simon lui-même (ou elle-même 8D)
Now I was a girl in dude's clothings too big for her with purple skin = Faut que tu mettes "with purple skin" après "girl" et avant le "dude clothes" parce que sinon c'est les vêtements qui ont une peau mauve.
Definitively = T'as mélangé avec "Definitely", je crois. Definitively veut dire "définitivement" alors que definitely est plutôt utilisé comme euh... "C'est sûr/certain !".

So there he was, minding his own business in the people-filled streets of Manhattan. It was a day like any other day. Dalton had a few plans. He was gonna see some people, drink, laugh... Same old, same old. Two things made sure to screw up his schedule: the purple chick he saw at the opposite side of the street (PURPLE LIKE ME!) and the crazy guy who shot at him two seconds later. His maniacal laughter still echoed in his ears when he realized that he was no longer a cool, laid-back purple dude, but a cool, laid-back purple lady. Well I'll be damned... Fox News was right?!


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Re: The Fairer Sexle Mer 23 Déc 2015, 14:37
While seeking for a place where I could hide and buy a bra, my eyes fell on a strange dude. Purple-skinned and with horns on his forehead. Totally normal. At least I wasn't the only oddball down here. I was staring at him when BOOM, another flash. Damn it ! I checked my breasts, yup, still there. But when I looked back at the mutant, he was no longer a he, but a she. A strange guy with a lasergun flew away in a second. I checked if any cars were coming and crossed the street. Hey ! Gir..Mate, are you okay ?

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Seeking for a place where I could hide and buy a bra, my eyes fell on a strange dude. Purple-skinned and with horns on his forehead. Usual. At least I wasn't the only oddball downhere. I was staring at him when BOOM, other flash. Damn it ! I checked my breast, yup, still there. But when I looked back at the mutant, he was no longer a he, but a she. A strange guy with a lasergun flew away in a second. I checked any car were coming and crossed the street. Hey ! Gir..Mate, are you okay ?


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Re: The Fairer Sexle Mer 23 Déc 2015, 15:16
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Professor Sip:
T'inquiète, j'ai tout compris 8)

Seeking for a place = While seeking for a place
Usual = Alors, si tu utilises "usual" tout seul comme ça, c'est plutôt dans le sens de "comme d'habitude", mais il manque le "as" pour faire "as usual". Donc dans le sens que tu cherches ('narmol'), tu peux juste mettre "Normal". C'est un truc bien français, donc y a pas vraiment une variante anglaise, mais si tu ajoutes des adjectifs comme "Totally normal" ou bien tu prolonges en disant "Well, that's normal." on comprend le même sens un peu sarcastique/ironique.
downhere = down here
other flash = another flash
my breast = my breasts → Vu que Simon(e) est une femme maintenant, et que tu parles sûrement de ses boobies, faut le mettre au pluriel (parce qu'il a toujours eu un torse ; par contre, les seins...)
I checked any car were coming = I checked if/whether any cars were coming → Obligé de mettre if ou whether ici + cars doit être au pluriel si tu dis "were" parce que "were" suggère le pluriel aussi. Sinon tu dis "I checked if a car was coming".

Was he okay? Was he "okay"?! Damn right, I am! Dalton replied, grinning like never before. I mean, I guess I'm hoping this is only temporary (I quite liked my body), but I can rock this shit for a day or two. He glanced down at his own body, trying to catch his reflection in the shop window. Damn, I look fine. I'm hot. I'm not gonna lie. Dalton probably thought about this moment a few times before. He turned around, focusing his attention right back on the mutant that had approached him. You're purple!


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Re: The Fairer Sexle Mer 23 Déc 2015, 15:55
I was stunned. Really ??! This weird shit wasn't a problem for him ? Damn, he was a chilled one. Dazed, I looked at him.. her, whatever. Well, okay, he turned into a hot chick but .. was it a reason to admire himself like that ? While pouting at his words, I glanced at my new, smooth, soft and sweet face. I was really cute. Ugh, that was so unfair, why did he get to be the hot one and me the cute one ? I sighed at his observation. Purple, green, pink .. I'm kind of multicolor. By the way, my skin started to fade back to its usual color.

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I was stunned. Really ??! This weird shit wasn't a problem for him ? Damn, he was a chilled one. Dazed, I looked at him.. her, whatever. Well, okay, he turned into a hot chick but .. was it a reason to admire himself like that ? While pounting at his words, I glanced at my new, smooth, soft and sweet face. I was really cute. Ugh, that was so unfair, why did he got the hot one and me the cute one ? I sighed at his observation. Purple, green, pink .. I'm kind of multicolor. By the way, my skin started to fade back to its usual color.



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Re: The Fairer Sexle Mer 23 Déc 2015, 16:10
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Professor Sip:
Tu peux me remercier en cookies /FRISBEE  *45

While pounting at his words = Je sais pas du tout ce que tu voulais dire avec "pounting". Je vois pas le mot XD Pondering peut-être ? Songer ?
why did he got the hot one = why did he get to be the hot one →  parce qu'ils sont hot et cute. Ils ne l'ont pas.

Huh! That's kinda cool too, I guess. Dalton stared at her chameleon skin, as it returned back to the boring, dull color of human flesh. Purple was so much better. What's your name, kid? And do you have any plans? He asked, because his own just changed. His instagram account needed an urgent update and his current baggy clothes just wouldn't do for this sexy bod'.


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Re: The Fairer Sexle Mer 23 Déc 2015, 16:29
Well, kinda cool if you can control it..yes. But I can't. While sighing again, I looked back at him. Simon, but now .. well Sim. Sim, it'll do. And you? While nervously looking at the passersby, I wrapped by arms around me, hiding my body the best i could.  Hrm, do you know .. any lingerie shops? The word "lingerie" made my cheeks turn into a bright pink. God, it was so embarassing. I had this annoying feeling i looked like an innocent virgin.

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Well, kinda cool if you can control it..yes. But I can't. While sighing again, I looked back at him. Simon, but now .. well Sim. Sim, it'll do. And you ? While looking nervously at the passerby, I warped by arms around me, hiding my body the best i could.  Hrm, do you know .. any lingerie shop ? The word "lingerie" made my cheeks turned into a bright pink. God, it was so embarassing. I had this annoying feeling i looked like an innocent virgin.


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Re: The Fairer Sexle Mer 23 Déc 2015, 17:52
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Professor Sip:
Aaaah, ouais, c'est bien ça. Pouting 8)

passerby = passersby en pluriel
while looking nervously = while nervously looking at → sinon tu dis qu'il a l'air nerveux, alors que là tu veux dire qu'il les regarde nerveusement (sa manière de regarder, pas son état)
warped = wrappedto warp c'est 'déformer' alors que to wrap c'est 'enrouler'
any lingerie shop = lingerie shops → j'aurais peut-être dû préciser avec la phrase des "any cars" en haut, mais si tu dis "any", tu dis (implicitement) qu'il y a plus qu'un shop, donc faut que tu le mettes au pluriel. Sinon, tu dois mettre l'article en singulier, donc : "Do you know a lingerie shop?"
made my cheeks turned = made my cheeks turn into (...)

Détail, mais en anglais il n'y a pas d'espace entre les mots et la ponctuation. Donc "How?" pas "How ?", par exemple. J'fais l'erreur tout le temps vu que je change de registre si souvent >_>

"Now"? That means he was another of the GenderBender's victims. That probably explained the uncomfortable choice of clothes as well, huh? Not really the kind of shops I usually frequent, Simmy. Dalton said. His fingers were already unlocking his iPhone. But do we really need to know anything by heart these days? He grinned and turned his phone screen towards his fellow mutant. GoogleMaps showed three lingerie shops in this block alone. They were in luck. Is lingerie really the first thing you think of, though, you perv?


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Re: The Fairer Sexle Lun 28 Déc 2015, 12:30
I looked at his screen and sighed with relief. Then my pink skin color spread from my face to the end of my toes, literally. What ? I.. I.. No, it's not .. Arrh. SHUT UP !, I finished, turning my back to him and started walking to the nearest lingerie shop. While walking, I muttered that I wasn't a perv, he was. I remembered he didn't tell me his name and asked him without looking at him, my eyes fixed on my goal.

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I looked at his screen and sighed with relief. Then my pink skin color spread from my face to the end of my toes, literally. What ? I.. I.. No, it's not .. Arrh. SHUT UP !, I finished, turning my back to him and starting walking to the nearest lingerie shop. While walking, I muttered that I wasn't a perv, he was. I remembered he didn't tell me his name and asked him without looking at him, my eyes fixed on my goal.


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Re: The Fairer Sexle Mar 29 Déc 2015, 19:35
Professor Sip:
Aw, mais te force pas si tu te sens pas bien, hein XD

starting walking = started walking →  nouvelle action, donc faut adapter le temps

Aw, you don't know me? I have to admit I'm kinda disappointed. I thought you came up to me cause you knew me. Though was it really such a bad thing that he didn't know him? That meant he had been cool enough to attract a (tiny) crowd even without his internet fame. Awesomesauce! (Or maybe Sim is just a really nice girl. Guy. Girl. Whatever.) I'm Dalton.


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I looked back at him, suspicious. I'm supposed to know you? Screwing up my eyes, I observed him with more intensity. Well ... It was hard to not picture him as a girl, that wasn't helping. Dalton? Dalton .. This name ringed a bell, but why? I didn't know. Maybe he had a blog or something? I was sort of a geek, but I only cared about what I wanted. I wasn't following the trend and just checked what I liked.
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Re: The Fairer Sexle Sam 02 Jan 2016, 18:32
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Professor Sip:
This name = that name →  Faut utiliser "that" quand tu parles d'un objet qui est pas proche de toi ; vu que là c'est un prénom, c'est plus difficile de 'localiser' l'objet, du coup on utilise "that"
the trend = trends in plural → quand tu parles de l'idée générale "la mode", c'est au pluriel ; quand tu parles d'une mode en particulier, c'est en singulier

Woaaah ! He laughed. Stop it, you're gonna hurt my feels*. In truth, there's no way Dalton would be butthurt so quickly. He was a pretty confident guy. And even more confident as a girl, apparently ! C'mon, I'll accompany you. I got boobs that need temporary fitting too. He started walking, unfastening his long hair to seem somewhat more feminine in his baggy clothes, and gawked at his new figure whenever they passed by a reflective surface.

*slang, pas de l'anglais correcte, hein 8D


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Re: The Fairer Sexle Dim 17 Jan 2016, 19:57
hrp:
Désolé du temps d'attente et merci encore ;u; *cookie sur toi*

Still walking, I couldn't help to stare at my fellow mutant next to me. He really turned into a beautiful girl and seems to have noticed it. Could you please stop staring at your reflection like that ? It's annoying, and a little bit weird .. I was grumpy but kind of relieved that he would come with me to the shop. Stoping in front of go there. Argh.
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Re: The Fairer Sexle Lun 18 Jan 2016, 15:13
HRP:
No worries. Prends ton temps 8)

I couldn't help to stare →  I couldn't help but stare
and seems toseemed (utiliser le même temps que la première partie de la phrase vu que tu écris au passé littéraire pour le reste du message aussi o/)
Stoping in front of go there → Je vois pas ce que tu veux dire en fait. Si t'as fait une faute de frappe et que le "stoping" doit être stopping, alors ta phrase donnerait "s'arrêter/s'arrêtant devant va là" en traduit, ce qui reste un peu vague XD

Heck no, he replied casually with a shrug. I don't know how long this shit lasts, but I know it ain't forever and I'm gonna enjoy my new looks. Dalton knew what he wanted and he wasn't the type to let someone dictate how he should behave. (Ya' really think he'd be with Magneto if he were like that?) Though there was one thing he wondered: How does it annoy you? Jealous? His grin betrayed that he wasn't serious, but people always felt the need to defend themselves anyway.


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Re: The Fairer Sexle Lun 18 Jan 2016, 16:29
HRP:
.. ah la boulet ... je relisais pour la enieme fois et je corrigeais pour pas dépasser et en fait .. j'ai effacer la moitié du rp c':. BOULET en puissance. Du coup là c'est le mix de deux phrases ;u; je voulais dire :"Stoping in front of the shop window, I groaned." .. c': Il y avait aussi une phrase sur la façon dont Simon était désespéré devant tant de soutien-gorge et le fait qu'il ne voulait pas rentrer dans le magasin ..

While rolling my eyes I sighed. Really? No. It's just that I don't like narcissist people, men or women. Plus, it is weird to check out yourself like that, it's like you wanted to fondle your own body .. Anyway, shall we go in there? I reluctantly looked at the shop-window, full of bras of every kind. Suddenly, a question hit me. How are we supposed to know our boobs size? I- I mean, I don't know anything about it... Damn ... I turned to face Dalton. Hm, I bet YOU know,.. perv.
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Re: The Fairer Sexle Mar 19 Jan 2016, 21:23
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HRP:
Aaah, ça explique tout ! XD

I don't like narcissist people →  l'adjective c'est "narcissistic"
our boobs size → either boobs' size" or "our boob size"

You know what... I won't even try to deny the "perv" statement, he started, but I actually have no idea for the size thing. Isn't it "one size fits all"? He seemed to ponder over Simon's question for about a second, then shrugged. Meh, we'll ask the people working there. Since they get to fondle breasts all day, they better know something! And he pulled him inside.


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