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MessageSujet: The city that never sleeps   Mar 7 Mai 2013 - 0:03
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Noah never gets lost. Never. Ever. So where the fuck was he and why was he lost ? It was the fourth time he stood still, scanning the horizon with the hope of finding any reference point he could use, but it was no use. His mind couldn't track his location. What's the fucking use of being a mutant if your ability keeps fucking everything up ? Shit. He kicked a can, his hands buried in the pockets of his jeans, and sighed. This was bad. He had promised Gage he'd be back by 7, and according to his cellphone - which couldn't find a signal - it was currently 6:30. He'd be in deep shit if he was late. Gage was one of the last people on earth you wanted to get angry. The little guy wasn't the most patient person in the world, and especially loathed waiting for Noah. But this was hardly his fault, right ? He simply had no clue where he was. The streets still looked like the common New York streets, but it had suddenly gotten really dark. Furthermore, the silence was nerve-racking.

New York City, the city that never sleeps, was dead.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Sam 22 Juin 2013 - 14:34
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Right... And let's hope there are no zombies in town. That would be great. He put his hands in his pockets and started to walk, not paying any attention to the girl who he knew would follow like a meek lamb as he headed for the city center. The streets were dead, cars parked right on the road, but there were no signs of disturbance or a panic. It was as if everybody just suddenly vanished, in the middle of their daily activities. 


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Lun 15 Juil 2013 - 9:44
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She followed him, a few steps behind, looking carefully at every dark corner and hole. Now she was pretty sure there was no zombie in the city but heh, who knows? They could meet a worst kind of threat. I feel like we're in a post-apocalyptic movie... Not that it's really different to where I come from but... What could have happened to people who used to leave here!?


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Lun 15 Juil 2013 - 16:55
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Is that a rhetoric question or do you expect me to answer ? Noah asked while gazing into an empty car. Hey, help me out here. If we push a few cars aside here, we could actually use this. He immediately put his words into action, by setting the vehicle in front of the nice sport car he had set his eyes on in neutral gear, and holding one hand on the wheel after having broken the glass. C'mon. I can't push this car by myself.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Jeu 18 Juil 2013 - 22:16
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Unknown looked at him then stared at the car. Gosh, you’re such a guy, she mumbled. She stepped closer and glanced inside. Well, she had to admit that it was a very nice one, comfy and all. Maybe you should try the engine first. I don’t want to tire myself out sweating on this if it doesn’t work.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Mar 23 Juil 2013 - 17:29
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Noah sighed, but the girl had a point. He just wasn't going to admit that. Alright, chica. He walked up to the sport car and opened the hood to look inside. Now, he wasn't a specialist - motorcycles were more his thing than cars - but he did know the basics. It looks fine. Exactly like he had expected. Probably full tank too.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Mer 24 Juil 2013 - 0:34
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Well, she was actually thinking of him starting the car to check if it worked but the guy seemed to know his business. And he's a guy after all. Guys know stuff about cars, right? Ok then, let's do this. She got at the back of the car they needed to push out of the way and leant against the trunk. 'm ready!


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Ven 26 Juil 2013 - 14:34
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Noah did the same, going back to his initial position behind the wheel, and started to push. Okay, go ! The car was relatively heavy, but they didn't have to push it very far. As soon as it was out of the way, they repeated the same thing with a few other cars, until a clear path was visible. Sweet.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Lun 29 Juil 2013 - 11:00
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She sighed, hands on her hips, satisfied with a well done job. Then she picked up her hammer from the ground nearby and got into the car - passenger sit, of course, she wouldn't harm his manhood. Besides, she didn't mind not being the driver to tell the truth.
She hadn't been in a car (I mean, a car in good condition, not an empty rusty shell) for years and the feeling was very... Nice! she said out loud. Shall we... ? 8D


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Sam 7 Sep 2013 - 15:38
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Yeah. I'm not sure where you want me to go exactly. He said, foot on the gas pedal. But I guess we'll find out. It was weird not to have a goal in mind. Being a tracker, Noah usually knew exactly where he was going. But this city was deserted and - call it whatever you want - he had a feeling in his gut that the best idea right now was to get the hell out.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Sam 7 Sep 2013 - 19:38
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While he was driving, Unknown looked carefully at the streets outside her window but she couldn't see any sign of life. No humans, no animals, no nothing. It was kinda weird not to see zombies at every corner and in a way... the feeling was wonderfull. She couldn't get over it, no matter what. Maybe we could find something to eat and then, get out of the town and see if there is someone somewhere ?


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Jeu 6 Mar 2014 - 22:30
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Yeah. Should definitely get out of this place. Being in an abandoned city (especially one as large as this one) was a sign of doom. You don't simply walk into the perfect zombie zone without getting yourself killed. And Noah had every intention of staying alive. Shout if you see something. I'll try to get us on the main road.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Mar 11 Mar 2014 - 22:32
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Roger! Unknown's eyes were wide-opened on everything. She watched carefully every sign and every front window they drove along, mainly because she was starving. But there was not as many food stores as she first thought. Ha! Finally! she said, triumphant. A mini-market! Right there in the street we just pass! She turned toward Noah and asked : Wanna go shopping? 8D


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Mar 11 Mar 2014 - 23:08
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He stopped the car when she shouted. Right in the middle of the road. It's not like they'd be in anyone's way since this town seemed to be a ghost town. Let's just grab some provisions and be on our way. I don't like the look of this place... He stepped out of the car, looking around with squinted eyes, but there was (still) no sign of life.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Mer 12 Mar 2014 - 0:12
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Right, she said with approval. She didn't want to linger in the place either. She pushed the door open and the hinges creaked. Creepy, she mumbled. The whitish light flickered here and there and the aisles were not even messed up like it would have been if people had panicked. Even more creepy, she mumbled again. Let's be quick.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Mer 12 Mar 2014 - 11:24
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Okay, you go grab some food. Something easy that doesn't need heating preferably. I'll go see if there's anything else we can use. We'll meet by the entry in 10 minutes tops. He started walking in the other direction, but turned around again at the last second. Oh and don't do anything stupid. There might not be a person in sight, but that doesn't mean we have to announce we're here anyway.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Jeu 13 Mar 2014 - 20:55
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Shivers ran along her spine. Count on me! Then she grabbed a plastic basket and disappeared in the closer aisle looking for anything they could eat while driving out of the damn ghost town. After a few minutes, she had cookies and cakes and crisps. She also found some bread and cooked meats and apples which seamed good. Like it's been there for a couple of days at the most. Then she took some easy-opening cans and water bottles and started to go back to the entrance.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Jeu 13 Mar 2014 - 21:38
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It's crazy what you can find in a grocery store. There wasn't a lot of survival gear, like he hoped, but there was plenty to go by. A pocket-knife, two small flashlights, and some other stuff that I'm too lazy to list here, but it's all there, in a nice cheap-o backpack. And so, geared up and ready, the blue-haired boy walked back to the entry. Got everything ?


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Jeu 13 Mar 2014 - 23:55
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She shrugged. Dunno. Never done that. It was pure truth. Without memory, it was just so. In doubt, she held her basket out to Noah with an inquisitive look. Did I forget something important ?


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Ven 14 Mar 2014 - 0:43
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Err, hold on. He said, while lifting up a few items to see what she had in the basket. He was about to answer her, when he got interrupted by a beeping sound that slowly gained in loudness as if it were approaching. As he turned around to see where the noise was coming from, he saw a big round metal thing float towards them, with a bright red light that served as its eye. Shit. No fucking idea WHAT that thing is, but it's probably not friendly. Good thing it didn't seem to have noticed them yet.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Ven 14 Mar 2014 - 23:29
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Oh no, she said, kneeling down immediately. She hid herself behind a checkout and eyed above the conveyor belt. The thing seemed to be in a daily patrol - for what, huh? - and was slowly sliding along the checkouts. She ducked again and looked at Noah. We need to move! her lips shaped but she didn't see where to go. Oh! and the basket was still in sight. Wonderful.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Ven 14 Mar 2014 - 23:57
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He ducked. Of course they needed to fucking move. But there was only one exit. Ooooh, the irony. Maybe there was a back door, but that'd make noise and they'd definitely get spotted. The best they could do was wait it out and hope the thing would go away by itself. Definitely not draw attention to their position. Please, PLEASE, woman, tell me you can at least play dead.

Irregularity detected, Axle. The core said, hovering above the basket.
Yes, Exal. Irregularity detected. He said again, with a slightly different intonation. Great. Multiple personalities too.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Dim 23 Mar 2014 - 13:23
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Oh my god, there are two of them, she thought while giving a terrified look to Noah. She was convinced that there was someone somewhere looking throw the eye of the core and speaking with it. Then she lost her train of thought when they heard an other sound coming towards them. It was an mechanic arm, probably due for cleaning what was in the wrong place.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Dim 23 Mar 2014 - 15:09
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Yeah. They had to go. Though maybe they could wait it out. Maybe, just maybe, those robots would leave all by themselves. Clean up the mess, then scatter. He wasn't very hopeful that would be the case, but it was nice to live in a fantasy once in a while. We need a distraction. He whispered.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Lun 24 Mar 2014 - 23:38
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Something tilted in her head. She searched her pocket and got out a tiny nail clippers. What? She was a girl, she needed that stuff, right? Oh yeah, she often needed it after a zombie fight. She totally lived with it. And right now, this little thing would saved both their lives. Maybe.
She threw it towards an aisle.

Irregular sound detected, Axle. The core said.
Yes, Exal. Irregular sound detected. He said again.

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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Mar 25 Mar 2014 - 14:38
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Noah watched the core move away from the basket, following the sound those clippers made perfectly. I'm not gonna say he was impressed, but he certainly didn't expect the girl to act so fast. Aren't girls usually scared and whiny in dangerous situations ? What the hell is wrong with this chick ? Okay, go go go ! He mouthed, running towards the exit.


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MessageSujet: Re: The city that never sleeps   Mar 25 Mar 2014 - 21:48
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When he mouthed the signal to run, she was already on her feet. By the time the core arrived to the clippers, they were almost at the doors. And when Unknown slipped on the floor two steps from the outside, the core's voices were saying something about irregular movements.
Fortunately for Unknown, Noah was quick and helped her get back on her feet again. Three seconds later, they were running towards the car.


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